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Personal Statement

These services are ideal for students who need help in editing or the creation of their personal statement for UCAS. We can offer a specialist service for medical and nursing applications as well as specialized teaching personal statement help. Our services gives the student a comprehensive personalised statement from scratch plus the editing and critique service for your UCAS personal statement for valid for one week after receipt of your statement to make changes.

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Silver £55
  • Fully edited version of your personal statement
  • Critique report highlighting strengths and weaknesses of your personal statement
  • Suggestions of ways to improve your statement
Gold £80
  • Everything included in our Silver package
  • 1 further review and report on your statement, worth £40
  • Opportunity to purchase additional review if required
Platinum £110
  • Everything included in our Gold package
  • 1 further revision (2 in total) of your statement worth £80
  • One-to-one help and support with your UCAS application with 24 hour phone support

Do you wonder how to complete your personal statement?

Our team have many years’ experience of helping students to write an effective UCAS personal statement. The writing and editing service we provide can help you produce a personal statement that will impress your readers and give an excellent impression of you as a prospective university student.

Our services can provide you with either a model personal statement or a carefully edited version of your own draft.

We shall send you a detailed questionnaire which will provide our writers with the necessary information to design your statement, and within 5 days, we shall send you a draft which you can then modify yourself, if you wish, to produce the final piece for submission on your UCAS form.

Editing

If you want to submit a statement you have written in order to have it reviewed and edited we can return it to you with changes and advice about how to present yourself in the best possible way to the admissions tutor. The English expression will be assessed and corrected where necessary and you will receive advice on the planning of your statement, suggesting which parts are less relevant and which need more substance. You will benefit from the editing experience of writers who have had great experience in preparing texts for publication or for formal use.

Typically the editing service will

  • Correct spelling and grammar.
  • Check the punctuation and capitalisation
  • Rephrase awkwardly composed sentences
  • Check the clarity of vocabulary and the length of sentences
  • Make sure that the style and register are appropriate to a formal piece of writing.
  • Oversee paragraphing and logic in what you say.

Aspects that are specifically relevant to your UCAS personal statements will be checked, and your editor will:

  • Ensure that an introduction leads the reader effectively into your statement.
  • Make sure that all the relevant areas of the subject have been covered (always ensuring that the all-important 4000 character limit is observed).
  • Check the structure and balance of the statement.
  • Advise you on how to show your strengths and skills to the reader.
  • Remove negative aspects which might work to your disadvantage.
  • Make sure that the statement has a sound conclusion.

When the editing of your personal statement is completed, it will be emailed to you, together with any further comments by your editor

The editor will explain the changes he has made or advised by providing:

  • Detailed comments on your existing personal statement
  • Advice on where your statement is strong and where it might be less effective.
  • An account of the amendments the editor has made and why.
  • Possibly some ideas about other changes you might consider

In using our service you can be entirely confident that you are entrusting your statement to the best possible team of professional writers and editors. We can guarantee the following:

  • Editors with long experience. All our editors are native English speakers, and graduates holding at least a 2:1 degree and based in the UK.
  • Totally reliable and discreet service: No one outside our editing team can gain access to the work you have sent us, and neither UCAS nor any university or educational institution can view it before you submit it to them.
  • Every statement is considered and edited according to its individual requirements: All changes to your personal statement will be written directly by your editor. Nothing will be copied from any other source.

To find out more

If you have any further questions before you offer us your statement, please don’t hesitate to ask. You can email us at

[email protected] and we promise to reply to your questions as quickly as possible.

Even if you are still uncertain about using our service, please read some of the other pages on the site. There is much information on how to write a personal statement, including a number of examples of statements for particular subject areas.

We hope that writing your personal statement is a successful and satisfying venture, and that it really allows you to show you talents and skills.

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